CAUSE-EFFECT
ESSAY OUTLINE
I.
Introduction
A. Hook/Attention getter:
The
earth is a bless which gives by the god for the living organisms.
B. General statement:
But
nowdays, the earth is suffering from many type of problem examples haze, air
pollution, water pollution and land pollution. Among this on of the problem
which growing too fast is haze.
C. Thesis statement:
Haze
is a pollution which brings many causes and effects for the living organisms.
II.
Body
A. Topic sentence:
Firstly,
on of it is slash and burn method of farming in neighbouring countries is cause
of haze problem.
1. Supporting point 1:
When
they conducting this method the air out from the farming area will combine with
the natural air and it spread to country by country.
a. Sub-supporting point 1:
Our
farmers and plantation owners also must bear some of the blame.
2. Supporting point 2:
Other
than that, open burning also the main source of haze. Open burning of rubbish
are mostly by the Malaysians. To make their work easier they are burning the
rubbish on open air.
a. Sub-supporting point 1:
In
addition the gas come out from chemical factories or industrial area also the
main source of haze.
B. Transition paragraph
1. Summary / conclusion:
So, burn
method of farming in neighbouring and open burning also the main source of haze.
2.
Transitional sentence:
However
disastrous the consequences of the haze were, it had one negative outcome. The
haze also can bring many effects
C. Topic sentence 2:
The
haze also can bring many effects for humans health. It will increase the
respiratory problems such as lung infections and astma attacks.
1. Supporting point 1:
The
government should take some immediate action to prevent from happening haze.
The government should cooperating with neighbouring countries authorities to
reduce using slash and burn mehod on farming.
a. Sub-supporting point 1:
They also
should raise the public awareness of the danger of forest fires. However
govement also can provide assistance to farmers and introduce better forest
clearing methods.
2. Supporting point 2 (2 marks):
The
haze also affects the social life of people.
a. Sub-supporting point 1:
Many
people would rather stay at home and not venture outdoors when the haze is
around. This is because they wish to avoid being sick or meeting with an
accident.
III.
Conclusion
A. Restatement of the thesis statement:
This
problem must be solved by the government as soon as possible before it grow and
become a big problem.
B. Suggestion/recommendation 1:
The
government should suggest strict laws, paralyze those who practice open
burning. They also need intensified campaign on the dangers of open burning.
IV. Reference
Koh,
K.L. 2008. A breakthrough in solving the Indonesian haze? In Hart, S. (ed).
.Shared
resources: Issues of governance. Gland, Switzerland: International
Union
for the Conservation of Nature and Natural Resources.
Chiew
[M15] H. 2010. former Environmental Reporter, The Star. Kuala Lumpur.
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